Friday, June 20, 2008

When it Rains

When it rains,
it pours,
isn't that the way of things?
Never to little,
always to much,
never enough,
so you have to keep giving?
A great force of effort for you,
is nothing to the world.
So what should you do?
Give up,
or keep going?
Stand still,
or keep moving?
I say go forward,
keeping moving,
outside of the flow,
different and unique,
for all to see.
Your efforts will stand out,
apart from the rest of the crowd.
It will take time,
lots of effort,
and failures.
Learn from the failures,
think over the time,
increase the effort,
and trust me,
you'll make it just fine.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

yet again, another amazing peice!

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EngleInDerHoll said...

Thnx....=D
Ur poems r really cool
Keep going ;)
C ya

Jessica Shope said...

Nice. :]